Just minutes before, everything had been completely normal. He had sat eating his breakfast at the kitchen table, as he did every day of his life.
It was only when he looked in the mirror that he realized something was wrong. For several seconds he had panicked, and a sick feeling grew in his stomach. His mouth felt dry and he started to sweat as he sprinted from room to room, trying in vain to find a reflection.
How could this have happened? Of all days, why did it have to be today? This was the most important day of his life. He had to find help. So when his family came he put on his clothes and put flour on his face and hoped his family will not think he's missing. But when his family came they thought he was missing so they put up posters everywhere. When he saw the posters he got his marshmallows and ate them, but when he finished it and went to look at the mirror he saw he was visible again. He was so happy that he got his friends and family and they had a party. THE END!!
It was only when he looked in the mirror that he realized something was wrong. For several seconds he had panicked, and a sick feeling grew in his stomach. His mouth felt dry and he started to sweat as he sprinted from room to room, trying in vain to find a reflection.
How could this have happened? Of all days, why did it have to be today? This was the most important day of his life. He had to find help. So when his family came he put on his clothes and put flour on his face and hoped his family will not think he's missing. But when his family came they thought he was missing so they put up posters everywhere. When he saw the posters he got his marshmallows and ate them, but when he finished it and went to look at the mirror he saw he was visible again. He was so happy that he got his friends and family and they had a party. THE END!!
Why is today the most important day of his life? What is supposed to be happening? A normal day
Who is ‘he’? Jay
What has happened to him? He turned invisible
When did it happen? After break-feast
What caused him to finally realize what happened? when he looked in the mirror
How will he find help? By eating marshmallows
Why is he wearing gloves? so his family can see him
What will he do next? After he became visible he had a party
Can you have a go at writing the content of the letter? Yes
Kia Ora Natania,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story! Is this one you wrote yourself or one that you found? I liked that there was a quiz at the end. I wonder why marshmallows saved him from being invisible? What do you think might happen next?
Ngā Mihi,
Miss Short