I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi, today I finished my information report about wolves. It took a few weeks to finish. I picked to write about wolves because I knew a lot about them. I worked so hard so I can show it to you so I hope you like it. (;
Ello Natania! I liked how you kept the planning to write part in it. It shows your process/thinking of the slide. I think maybe you should add a background and change the colour of the font, also add a bit of pictures to show what the thing thing your talking about. I never knew there were only 3 types of wolves! Anyway I think this is amazing apart from the things I pointed out. Bye! :D
Bula Natania. I like your Information report. You should put a backround. Why did you put pictures on Habitat, Diet, Population, Predators, Hangout.
ReplyDeleteEllo Natania! I liked how you kept the planning to write part in it. It shows your process/thinking of the slide. I think maybe you should add a background and change the colour of the font, also add a bit of pictures to show what the thing thing your talking about. I never knew there were only 3 types of wolves! Anyway I think this is amazing apart from the things I pointed out. Bye! :D
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